Review: Raven Strategem by Yoon Ha Lee

Raven Strategem by Yoon Ha Lee

Published: Solaris (2017)

Series: Book 2 of the Machineries of Empire

Awards Nominated: Hugo and Locus SF Awards

The Book:

“Captain Kel Cheris is possessed by a long-dead traitor general. Together they must face the rivalries of the hexarchate and a potentially devastating invasion. When the hexarchate's gifted young captain Kel Cheris summoned the ghost of the long-dead General Shuos Jedao to help her put down a rebellion, she didn't reckon on his breaking free of centuries of imprisonment--and possessing her.

Even worse, the enemy Hafn are invading, and Jedao takes over General Kel Khiruev's fleet, which was tasked with stopping them. Only one of Khiruev's subordinates, Lieutenant Colonel Kel Brezan, seems to be able to resist the influence of the brilliant but psychotic Jedao. Jedao claims to be interested in defending the hexarchate, but can Khiruev or Brezan trust him? For that matter, will the hexarchate's masters wipe out the entire fleet to destroy the rogue general?” ~WWEnd.com

I started reading this series due to it being a Hugo finalist, but I’ve continued reading them because they’re just so interestingly weird.  I’ve reviewed the first book here. The final novel in the trilogy, Revenant Gun,  is currently up for the Hugo again, so we’ll see how the series fares this year!

My Thoughts:

Raven Stratagem picks up not too long after the conclusion of Ninefox Gambit, and the reader needs to remember the details of the previous novel.  I’d recommend reading this series in order, and preferably not with long gaps in between. Sadly, I did not take this advice. I spent the first part of the book reminding myself of the universe, and also wondering if I had totally misread part of the ending of Ninefox Gambit.  It turns out that I didn’t, and everything does make sense in the end. It was just that several characters keep their cards very close to the chest, and sometimes secrets the reader doesn’t know can seem like narrative discontinuity or inconsistent characterization. After the reveals throughout Raven Stratagem, my faith in Lee’s storytelling has been strengthened for the final novel of the trilogy.

Raven Stratagem has more focus on the characters than the first novel, but I would still say that characterization is not its strong point.  We don’t have the perspective of Cheris/Jedao this time, so there isn’t much development there. Of the other characters, I most enjoyed reading about General Kel Khiruev, a woman who is put in an incredibly difficult position.  Formation instinct requires her to obey Jedao, but she also has personal moral principles that she wants to follow. The soldier who is immune to formation instinct, Brezan, has a different problem--he is free to oppose Jedao, but he can only do so alone.  Of all the characters, I was least interested in reading about the political machinations of the faction leaders. Even Mikodez, our perspective character, is kind of flat and inhuman. I’m wondering if this is intentional, as a way to represent how the Hexarchate crushes the humanity out of those who manage to rise up in its ranks.

I was most impressed by the world-building in Ninefox Gambit, and that continues to be a strong point in Raven Stratagem.  The broad strokes of the Hexarchate were laid out in the first book, and in this one we start to fill in more details.  I had a hard time keeping all the factions straight in the first book, but here we get to see more interaction with the members of each.  Exploring the Kel faction formation instinct, which enforces the soldier’s obedience to authority, is also a major focus of the novel. I feel like I also got a clearer picture this time of the sheer horror of the Hexarchate.  Their government is incredibly dehumanizing and oppressive, and it is only becoming more so as time goes on. It is very easy to sympathize with a heretic’s desire to destroy it. Like Ninefox Gambit, this novel does tell a complete story, but it is still clearly part of a larger arc that I expect to conclude with Revenant Gun.

My Rating: 3.5/5

Raven Stratagem is the second book of the creatively weird Machineries of Empire series, where adherence to calendar systems define the society and available technology. I enjoyed getting more details about the Hexarchate and its people, and I liked that there was a little more focus on characterization than in the first novel. On the other hand, there was also a plotline focusing on politics between villainish aristocrats, which didn’t really catch my interest.  Overall, I did enjoy the novel, and I’ll definitely be reading the conclusion of the series, Revenant Gun!

Review: The Red: First Light by Linda Nagata

The Red: First Light by Linda Nagata

Published: Mythic Island Press (2013), Saga Press (2015)

Series: Book 1 of The Red

Awards Nominated: Nebula and Campbell Awards

The Book:

“There always needs to be a war going on somewhere--or at least that is the opinion of extremely wealthy defense contractors who manufacture them for profit.  The situation looks quite different on the ground, where Lieutenant James Shelley desperately attempts to keep himself and his team alive.

Shelley never intended to be a soldier, but one unlucky choice in anti-war activism led to him being forced into the role.  He chooses not to cope with his depression and guilt through heavy use of a piece of standardized gear that regulates his emotions.  However, it looks like that may not be all it does.  Shelley’s team has nicknamed him “King David”, because it sometimes seems like God is whispering into his mind to keep him from danger.  But if his hunches are not from God, then who are they really from?  They may be protecting him for now, but what is their true goal?” ~Allie

I’m not usually into military science fiction, but I decided to try The Red: First Light after I enjoyed reading a short story by Linda Nagata.  I really liked her writing style.

My Thoughts:

Though I’m not very well read in the military science fiction subgenre, The Red: First Light delivered what I would have expected.  The protagonist and most other characters are soldiers, and they use high tech weaponry and armor that is carefully described. A fair amount of the plot takes place in military training and various combat operations, which sometimes felt a bit like being in a co-op video game. However, I appreciated that the combat was generally not about heroics, and the characters didn’t seem to lose sight of the fact that the people on both sides of the engagement were human beings.  Nagata’s skill at portraying authentic-seeming characters made me feel more connected to Shelley and his comrades, and it also made the violence feel more immediate and stressful.  This is not the kind of novel where all of your favorite characters will make it to the final curtain call.

In addition to having a lot of action, the story covers some very interesting social and technological ideas.  The social and political side is very relevant for current affairs.  I think most people would agree that war for profit and governmental corruption are wrong, though no one seems to be able to do anything about either.  On the social side, we have a world moving toward perpetual connectivity and questions that arise about rights to privacy.  In this world, civilians have privacy rights, but as a soldier and a man convicted of a crime, Shelley does not.  He no longer even owns his experience of his own life, since 24/7 footage taken by his embedded computer system is provided to his superiors.  He might not feel the burden while at war, but it takes a toll when he has to consider who is watching him interact with his sort-of-ex-girlfriend or his civilian activist friend.  And, of course, he has no power over what others will choose to do with the recording of his life.  As we move into a future with more and more surveillance, we will have to consider how much of a right to privacy people can or should expect.  

On the technological side, the main points of interest for me are prosthetics and AIs.  Even today, prosthetics have advanced to the point where soldiers who have lost limbs can sometimes return to active duty. The advanced prosthetics in The Red: First Light are a prototype designed to enhance Shelley’s effectiveness in combat beyond what he could have done with his natural limbs.  All the same, the prosthetic limbs are certainly not a magic fix (or anything one would want to sacrifice limbs to acquire), and I was interested to see the details and difficulties of incorporating this kind of technology into one’s life. Ideas about the development of AI are kind of in the background, though they do drive much of the plot.  I don’t want to give this part of the story away, but it was a very original take on the origin of an artificial intelligence and its relationship with humanity.

My Rating:4/5

Altogether, The Red: First Light is an action-packed military SF story that raises a lot of questions about society and where we’re going next.  What can we do about a world perpetually at war and governments that are blatantly corrupt?  Under what conditions should a person lose their right to privacy? In addition, the novel’s ideas about enhanced military prosthetics and the possible development of artificial intelligence extrapolates from current technologies in an interesting direction. I am really curious to see how this will develop in the rest of the trilogy.